0008664: "A image" and "a ... mechanisms" in item description

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Summary	0008664: "A image" and "a ... mechanisms" in item description

Revision	2014-12-26 18:54 by lethosor
Description	I have encrusted some furniture with granite which was cut into cushion cabochons. The description of the final item (<<mica mechanisms>>) is a bit weird, though: "This is a superior quality mica mechanisms. On the item is a image of a cushion cabochon in granite by Onul Morulunal." I see three issues with it: # a ... mechanisms - pick either "a" or plural (but that's in all descriptions of mechanisms, it seems) # a image - "an" # "a(n) image of a cushion cabochon in granite" - Shouldn't it be rather something like "a(n) image of (_something_) (made from/in) cushion granite cabochon"? How can you make an image of granite cabochons with granite cabochons?

Revision	2014-12-26 18:54 by lethosor
Description	I have encrusted some furniture with granite which was cut into cushion cabochons. The description of the final item (<<mica mechanisms>>) is a bit weird, though: "This is a superior quality mica mechanisms. On the item is a image of a cushion cabochon in granite by Onul Morulunal." I see three issues with it: # a ... mechanisms - pick either "a" or plural (but that's in all descriptions of mechanisms, it seems) # a image - "an" # "a(n) image of cushion cabochon in granite" - Shouldn't it be rather something like "a(n) image of (_something_) (made from/in) cushion granite cabochon"? How can you make an image of granite cabochons with granite cabochons?