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IDProjectCategoryView StatusDate SubmittedLast Update
0002389Dwarf FortressTypos/Grammarpublic2010-06-19 20:292011-03-13 18:26
ReporterCespinarve 
Assigned ToFootkerchief 
PrioritylowSeveritytextReproducibilityN/A
StatusresolvedResolutionno change required 
PlatformMacBookOSOSXOS Version10.5.8
Product Version0.31.08 
Target VersionFixed in Version 
Summary0002389: Arsenal Dwarf needs indefinite article- Adventure Mode
DescriptionWhen meeting an arsenal dwarf in Adv. Mode, if you ask about there profession, they reply "I am arsenal dwarf". The sentence calls for an 'an' in there, or even 'a'. E.G. "I am an arsenal dwarf"
Tagstypo
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- Relationships
child of 0000229new Adventurer mode - Warlord grammar 

-  Notes
(0008748)
Footkerchief (manager)
2010-06-20 01:04

"I am president." "I am the president." Both of these are acceptable, so why not for an arsenal dwarf?
(0008758)
Cryten (reporter)
2010-06-20 03:22

I am president dosn't really sound right like the person dosnt have the ability to make a full sentence. So I guess thats asthetics and "proper" english. So I support the change even if it is very minor.
(0008773)
Footkerchief (manager)
2010-06-20 09:17
edited on: 2010-06-20 09:19

I am president dosn't really sound right like the person dosnt have the ability to make a full sentence. So I guess thats asthetics and "proper" english.

"I am president" is completely proper and at worst sounds very slightly archaic. Although it's not used as often for the main clause of a sentence, it's frequently used in subordinate clauses, e.g. "while I am president" and "until I am president."

(0009538)
Cespinarve (reporter)
2010-07-02 13:44

I was under the impression that arsenal dwarf was along the lines of a quartermaster- in charge of the equipment. A president can use the Royal We- he exists as an embodiment of a head of state, like a king. A quartermaster is just a job, and hardly the most prestigious. Thus "I am the arsenal dwarf" reflects his position better.
(0009542)
Footkerchief (manager)
2010-07-02 14:38

Omission of the article doesn't require that the office be prestigious. That's just the context you're used to hearing it in, because archaic forms are more often used in formal settings.
(0009771)
Cespinarve (reporter)
2010-07-07 21:23

The question is now moot- Toady has removed the position of arsenal dwarf.
(0009782)
Footkerchief (manager)
2010-07-08 06:24

Good point.

- Issue History
Date Modified Username Field Change
2010-06-19 20:29 Cespinarve New Issue
2010-06-20 01:04 Footkerchief Note Added: 0008748
2010-06-20 03:22 Cryten Note Added: 0008758
2010-06-20 08:38 Logical2u Relationship added child of 0000229
2010-06-20 09:17 Footkerchief Note Added: 0008773
2010-06-20 09:18 Footkerchief Note Edited: 0008773 View Revisions
2010-06-20 09:19 Footkerchief Note Edited: 0008773 View Revisions
2010-07-02 13:44 Cespinarve Note Added: 0009538
2010-07-02 14:38 Footkerchief Note Added: 0009542
2010-07-07 21:23 Cespinarve Note Added: 0009771
2010-07-08 06:24 Footkerchief Note Added: 0009782
2010-07-08 06:24 Footkerchief Status new => resolved
2010-07-08 06:24 Footkerchief Resolution open => no change required
2010-07-08 06:24 Footkerchief Assigned To => Footkerchief
2011-03-10 09:49 AO Tag Attached: typo
2011-03-10 10:44 Footkerchief Issue Monitored: AO


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